What I'm Working On

- Developing the main topic throughout all paragraphs of the essay
- Further elaborate on the main point in both the third and concluding paragraphs of the 
  essay
- Having a bold and surprising main point 
- Strong thesis statement
- Strong and informative topic sentences
- Sentence structure variation
- Improved transition sentences from paragraph to paragraph
- Making a clear and concise main point



1 comment:

  1. What more than anything else would you like to improve on in your next essay? Sentence writing? Ideas?

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